My heart about stopped when I read that line, because it would chill a mother to her bones to hear it, and it also carries foreshadowing of the times in the future when he will fall so far.
This is beautiful writing and such a wonderful and true portrait of Blythe and the son she loves so much.
(The only thing I saw was an "its" that should be "it's" down at "Its another day ...")
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Date: 2008-02-24 09:05 pm (UTC)My heart about stopped when I read that line, because it would chill a mother to her bones to hear it, and it also carries foreshadowing of the times in the future when he will fall so far.
This is beautiful writing and such a wonderful and true portrait of Blythe and the son she loves so much.
(The only thing I saw was an "its" that should be "it's" down at "Its another day ...")