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namaste ([personal profile] namaste) wrote2007-10-08 09:06 am

Fic: Disobedience

Title: Disobedience
Author: Namaste
Summary Five times Greg House didn’t do as he was told.
Notes: Originally written for the Ficwriters_Anon challenge here and now posted in my LJ. About 1,000 words.





“Don’t,” Mom said. “Don’t touch it. It’s hot.”

But there was a glow coming from somewhere inside. The light flickered out from the lantern, casting shadows that fluttered with the breeze. It was like something was alive in there, something breathing. He reached out, felt the glow moving toward him, its warmth spreading into his fingers, onto the palm of its hand. The light flickered again, grew angry and he screamed as it burned itself into his skin.

“Oh, sweetie,” Mom said, and held him close. She ran cold water over his hand. “Shhh,” she said. “It’ll be all right.”

She kissed his forehead and wiped away his tears. She spread something over his skin. It was cool, and it felt good. “Next time, maybe you’ll listen when I tell you not to touch.”


********

“Don’t,” Dad said. “Don’t lie to me, Greg.”

He straightened up, stared his father in the eye. “I’m not lying,” he said. “I didn’t take the money.” He’d earned it, he thought to himself. Every other kid got money for doing chores around house. Besides, Dad never paid him for washing his car last week, like he’d promised.

“Then where did you get this?” Dad held out a twenty. “You need to find a better hiding place than under the mattress, son.”

Greg didn’t speak. It wouldn’t matter what he said now anyway.

“You’re a liar and a thief,” Dad said. “I don’t know what to do with you anymore.”

If he expected an apology, Greg wouldn’t give him one. If he thought Greg would beg for mercy, he wouldn’t get that either.

“Go to your room, until I figure out what I’m going to do with you,” Dad said.

Greg closed the door behind him. After a few minutes he heard Dad’s steps in the hallway, marking the route between the bathroom and the kitchen. He waited until he knew Dad was at the far end of the house, then opened his closet, reached into the toe of his dress shoes. The other twenties were still there. Dad hadn’t found them.

He heard Dad’s steps again and closed the closet. He was sitting on the bed when the door opened. “Come with me, son,” Dad said. “It’s time you learned a lesson.”


*********

“Don’t,” Millard said. “Don’t do that. We should wait.”

He reached out, tried to stop House from removing the IV line.

“Wait for what?” House said. He shook off Millard’s hands.

“The biopsy.” Millard took a step back, looked out the door. Maybe he was hoping one of the attendings would show up. Maybe he was afraid that they would.

“A biopsy will take time,” House said. “It’s allergic acute interstitial nephritis.” He stopped the flow of the cyclosporine, disconnected the IV line. The patient watched him, but didn’t say anything. She didn’t look like she had enough energy to even try. “We take her off the antibiotics and start a course of corticosteroids, and maybe we can reverse the damage.”

“We don’t know that,” Millard said, “not for sure.”

“We’ve got edema, fever, rash, increased blood pressure,” House counted off the symptoms one finger at a time. “We’ve got the confirmation from the urinalysis.”

“But a biopsy is the only definitive answer.”

House shook his head. “It’s two o’clock in the morning. We’re not going to find a surgeon now, and the longer we wait, the closer she gets to a kidney transplant list.”

Millard was quiet for a moment. “Let’s at least wait for an attending. Who’s on call?”

House stepped up to him. “If you’re scared, just leave. I can handle this myself.”

Millard looked at the patient, then at House. He walked away, closing the door behind him.


*********

“Don’t,” Stacy said. “Don’t even bother asking.”

“Why not?”

She took off her helmet, dark hair framing her face, the afternoon sun bathing her in light. “Because I’ll say no.”

“But you shot me.” House pointed to the splotch of orange paint on his white shirt just to the right of his sternum, over his ribs, his lungs -- close to his heart. “This is going to leave a bruise. That entitles me to at least dinner and a movie.”

“I’m not the only one who shot you.” She pointed to the blue splatters along his arm, on his back, his side.

House shrugged. “Friendly fire,” he said, “it happens.”

“Eight times?”

“Nine,” House said, pointing to one blotch that nearly covered another one. “Phillips got me twice.”

“Am I supposed to be impressed that you piss people off? Or is this some macho thing about pain?”

House stepped closer to her, caught the scent of a soft perfume in the breeze. “You’re supposed to be intrigued by my brutal honesty,” he saw the hint of a smile hiding behind her eyes.

“I don’t think that ‘intrigued’ is the word I’d use.”

“Sure it is, or you would have left by now, like all the other ambulance chasers.” He nodded toward the field behind her. It was nearly empty. Only a few stragglers were making their way over the course to the parking lot. “Dinner,” he said, “and a movie.”

Stacy shook her head. “Coffee,” she said, “and I pick the place.”

“Anytime,” House said, “and anywhere.”


**********


“Don’t,” Wilson said. “Don’t pour me anymore. I’ve had enough.”

House held the bottle over the glass and Wilson finally sighed and moved his hand. House poured the bourbon over the ice. “It’s not as if you’ve got anyone waiting for you at home,” he said. “For that matter, no home either.”

“Not again,” Wilson mumbled. He picked up the glass, took a sip.

“You rag on me about the Vicodin and I can’t mention the ‘H’ word?” House poured bourbon into his own glass and put the top back on the bottle.

“It’s not the same,” Wilson said. “I’m not addicted to living in a hotel.”

“You’ve been there for a year,” House said. “You haven’t even looked at an apartment in ten months. You’re not just addicted, you’re in denial.” He took a drink.

“It’s easier living there until the divorce is settled.”

“And it’s easier for me to keep taking Vicodin until the pain goes away.”

“Living in a hotel isn’t going to kill my liver.”

“Statistically, there are more violent crimes in hotels. You could be mugged tomorrow.”

“I could move out tomorrow.”

“And I could go into rehab again, but we both know that’s not going to happen either.”

Wilson finished off his drink, put the glass on the table. House grabbed the bottle, leaned forward and held it over Wilson’s glass.

Wilson sighed. “Go ahead. It’s not like I have anyone waiting for me at home.”

“So stay,” House said, “and have another drink.”


[identity profile] anniehow.livejournal.com 2007-10-08 02:03 pm (UTC)(link)
Particularly loved the last one

[identity profile] pwcorgigirl.livejournal.com 2007-10-08 02:07 pm (UTC)(link)
Ah, these are great. I love the little facets of House's personality each details: the curiosity, the resentment of those who don't keep promises, his belief in his talents, and that House-like ability to comfort and confront Wilson at the same time.

I have a soft spot for the one with Stacy for that marvelous banter and the hint of love of first sight. You do such a great Stacy voice, and it's great that she points out he's been shot by his own team eight times. And so very House-like that he corrects her.

[identity profile] shutterbug12.livejournal.com 2007-10-08 02:17 pm (UTC)(link)
I loved these, especially the last two. (I just realized I've seen so many colors used to describe the one Stacy hit him with.) You're good at writing House's personality with few words. All of the voices are really well done.

[identity profile] maineac.livejournal.com 2007-10-08 02:30 pm (UTC)(link)
Always happy to see a new fic by you. I love the arc that follows the trait of disobiedience from curiosity to defiance to the thing that makes him great, to the thing that is his Achilles heel (can't say no to drugs, and won't listen to Wilson). IT says so much with so little.

[identity profile] hibernia1.livejournal.com 2007-10-08 02:31 pm (UTC)(link)
Oh, Namaste, I love these. Thanks! I think I like that one with Millard the best. But basically, I like them all, showing House has always been, well, House.

[identity profile] poeia.livejournal.com 2007-10-08 02:39 pm (UTC)(link)
Perfect.

I particularly liked the Stacy one (which surprised me). But it was nice seeing how their relationship must have once been. I never realized until now, but his falling for her so fast (one week later, she moved in) after she shot him with a paint ball is almost a metaphor for being shot with Cupid's arrow.

“Friendly fire,” he said, “it happens.”
Giggle, giggle, snort, snort.

[identity profile] aithlyn.livejournal.com 2007-10-08 03:43 pm (UTC)(link)
I'm with the crowd that particularly loved the House/Stacy one; I can picture it so clearly in my mind! The whole thing was enjoyable, but that one stood out.

And I have one nit to pick: "You need to find a better hiding place then under the mattress, son.” That then should be than.

[identity profile] saara-zaara.livejournal.com 2007-10-08 03:46 pm (UTC)(link)
Very nice!

This is one of the best things I've read in a while, love the Stacy segment in particular.

(Anonymous) 2007-10-08 03:59 pm (UTC)(link)
Wonderful! Though I liked the House/Stacy one the best, I must say that you write John House better than anyone.

[identity profile] theanniemal.livejournal.com 2007-10-08 04:02 pm (UTC)(link)
this is great, as always, but the last one it made of win! excellent work.

[identity profile] hithah.livejournal.com 2007-10-08 07:23 pm (UTC)(link)
Very nice! I love how you picked out different aspects of House's personality (curiosity, his own brand of justice, his certainty in his diagnoses, etc) and highlighted them each in your stories. I particularly loved the Stacy one. I haven't read many "How House and Stacy met" fics (are they many?), but this one seemed very realistic, given what's been hinted at on the show. The Wilson one was great too. You captured that odd manner of House's of caring about Wilson by mocking him and pointing out his hypocrisies. Nicely done all around!

[identity profile] angelfirenze.livejournal.com 2007-10-08 11:56 pm (UTC)(link)
I loved the ones with the Houserents. John sounds like so many of my family members, thinking they can promise kids money for things and kids won't hold them to it. *scowls* Greg did earn that money. And I loved little Greg's point of view about how captivating the fire was and how it practically called to him.

"TOUCH ME!"

Well, he did. *amused grin* At least Blythe was understanding about it. I'm sure he learned that lesson. *nods*

[identity profile] sassydew.livejournal.com 2007-10-09 03:51 am (UTC)(link)
This is a lovely series. I really like the repetition of "Don't...Don't" for the first line of each instance - and, of course, the Stacy and Wilson ones are my favorites. :)

[identity profile] oursoliloquies.livejournal.com 2007-10-09 10:03 am (UTC)(link)
All of these segments are amazing, and the last one is just so, so great. Am always up for some good House/Wilson banter. You have all the characters' voices down to a T in this fic, and I love how you can express so much emotion with so few words, especially the sections involving House's parents. Wonderful job.

(Anonymous) 2007-10-13 05:22 am (UTC)(link)
Namaste, I just loved the Greg/Stacy one! I felt so sorry when she was finally gone and was dying to learn more about the relationship they must have had - and I was always curious how the "he was impossible but I moved in with him a week later" happened. This is the side of House we would like to know so much about - but on the other hand it would perhaps spoil the image we have of him - who knows??

Regards Namikwa

[identity profile] mariagoner.livejournal.com 2007-11-18 01:16 pm (UTC)(link)
This was lovely and unexpected and I adore how you seem to cycle back to the same beginnings. Wonderful bit of continuity with that one.