This is a really nice start - trying to tackle the Crandall/House will be interesting. I'm looking forward to reading part 2 tonight :)
Also, sorry to be annoying, but I think you missed one of pwcorgigirl's edits: 'He took a deep breath but only picked up only the cool air conditioned...'
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Date: 2007-08-23 02:20 am (UTC)Also, sorry to be annoying, but I think you missed one of pwcorgigirl's edits: 'He took a deep breath but only picked up only the cool air conditioned...'