Drive By Beta Fic

Drive-by beta/first readers time.

This is the first Cuddy-focused story (outside of ficlets) I've done for a year or so, and I'd love some feedback at this point as to whether it works, and if the basic idea -- Cuddy remembers her first days seeing patients as a med student and compares her days on rounds then to how she monitors the health of the hospital now -- works.

I'm also not quite certain if it it would be proper to refer to her seeing patients as a med student, or if it would be more appropriate to place her in a setting in her memories as an intern, so if you've got any insight or advice on that, I'd appreciate it.

I'm also not certain whether to give it a fifth season time frame in terms of Wilson -- and play into the "couples counseling" aspect -- or leave it as is without referring to the post-Amber situation.

A word of warning, this is not finished (I'm actually hoping some of you can give me some insight to help shape my rough plans to wrap it up) and it's a first write-thru, so it's kind of rough, but if anyone has ideas or comments, feel free to chime in.

Thanks.



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