Community beta time

Hey all.

I've got something new I'm working on -- looking at the lies House has been told, what he has come to believe and disbelieve, what he has learned not to trust -- and yet still believe in himself.

I could use some feedback though. I'm struggling with formatting, as well as issues related to other points I may want to hit (and some of these already written I may cut, since they don't seem to flow as well.)

I thought I'd pop this early version up on my LJ for a few days, while I'm out of town and letting the fic work itself out in my mind, hopefully, and also take ideas and feedback from anyone out there of a mind to give it. Any and all is welcome. (Oh, and if anyone can tell, I shameless steal part of a scene from "Tracking Time," recasting it in a different POV.)


I'm not certain if I'll keep the quotes as section breaks or not (Hmmm. Now that I'm thinking of it, perhaps I should use some of House's own quotes???). For the time being, I'm calling it Belief, Faith, Trust




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