I've been trying to use both Blythe and Wilson POVs in each chapter (though I suppose in a more traditional version they'd each be their own chapter and I'd write these as interconnected short stories). This was the first one I did with Wilson's POV coming first.
Usually I try to at least mark the change in POV, but I admit I struggled a bit with the best place to do the split. I did want to introduce new underestandings for both characters, though. And I kind of like the idea that Blythe assumed that House was joking about Wilson's marital history.
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Usually I try to at least mark the change in POV, but I admit I struggled a bit with the best place to do the split. I did want to introduce new underestandings for both characters, though. And I kind of like the idea that Blythe assumed that House was joking about Wilson's marital history.