namaste: (houserents)
[personal profile] namaste
New Fic: Family, Friends and Other Complications
Chapter Four: When Stacy Left
Author: Namaste
Rating: Gen, PG
Summary:
Blythe felt her frustration build. “James, just ... just tell me,” she said. “Did Stacy leave?”

James was silent for a few moments, then sighed. “Yes,” he said. “How did you know?”

“Mother’s intuition,” Blythe said. She had hoped to keep her tone light, but her words sounded hollow even to her own ears. “When?”



Previous chapters are here:
When Blythe Met Wilson
When Greg Got Sick
When Greg Went Home



Note: For those of you avoiding all spoilers, the story is safe, but some discussion comes up in the comments on the vague outlines of upcoming spoilers.

When Stacy Left



Blythe stared at the piece of black plastic on her table. The numbers were still backlit from the call she’d just made. James had been right. She had been able to keep in touch. But she’d found that she still no idea what was going on.

She’d called at least five times during the weekend, each time leaving a message. She’d told herself not to panic, that maybe this meant that Greg and Stacy had gone out, that it must be good that Greg was away from the house more.

But Saturday slipped into Sunday and they hadn’t called back. Sunday tumbled into Monday morning, and still nothing. She lay awake in bed, listening to John’s snores, staring at the ceiling, trying not to think about what might have happened. She told herself that James would have called if something bad happened.

She sat with John as he ate breakfast, and nodded when he assured her that everything was fine, that she was worked up over nothing. Finally she tried Greg’s office, but he didn’t answer there either. She finally got through to the department’s secretary who said she’d seen him that morning. Blythe knew that should have made her feel better, but instead she worried about why he’d avoided her calls.

There was no answer at Stacy’s office, and when she finally got Stacy on her cell, she didn’t find any peace.

“You should talk to Greg,” Stacy said.

“Stacy, what’s going on? Is Greg all right?,” Blythe had asked, holding the phone closer to her ear. “Please, tell me.”

She heard Stacy take a deep breath on the other side of the line, on the other side of the country. “He was fine when I saw him,” she finally said. “Maybe he’ll have something to say to you when you finally reach him.”

Blythe let the phone sit on the table while she filled her coffee cup again. She stared at the phone, black with silver trim, a high technology contrast to the white lace tablecloth she’d bought in Greece, when Greg was still just a little boy.

Stacy had a tablecloth like it, one of her mother’s heirlooms. Blythe remembered seeing it the last time they’d been in Princeton, when Greg and Stacy barely seemed to speak to each other, when even James hadn’t been able to smooth out the rough edges of Greg’s mood.

The few times she overheard Greg and Stacy’s conversations, the words were harsh, and she wondered what had happened that led to those arguments, and what came after. She followed those thoughts until she could guess what must have happened now. Blythe put her mug down on the tablecloth. She wondered if Stacy had taken her lace keepsakes with her when she packed.

Blythe picked up the phone, scrolled through the numbers in the memory and made another call.

She listened to the ring at the other end, and told herself that she wasn’t going behind Greg’s back. She just needed answers, and if Greg wasn’t going to provide them, then ...

“This is James Wilson.” Blythe smiled to hear his voice.

“James, good morning,” she said. “This is Blythe. I hope I’m not interrupting anything important.”

He hesitated for just a moment before he answered. “Of course not,” he said. “How are you?”

Blythe closed her eyes, decided to get to the point. “Worried,” she said. “Greg wasn’t answering his phone this weekend, and Stacy won’t give me a straight answer.”

He didn’t say anything for a moment. She heard the squeak of furniture and she could picture him in his office -- his white coat, clean white shirt, a dark tie hanging loosely from his collar -- as he leaned back in his desk chair.

“You should really talk to Greg,” he finally said. “I’ll track him down and have him call you.”

Blythe felt her frustration build. “James, just ... just tell me,” she said. “Did Stacy leave?”

James was silent for a few moments, then sighed. “Yes,” he said. “How did you know?”

“Mother’s intuition,” Blythe said. She had hoped to keep her tone light, but her words sounded hollow even to her own ears. “When?”

“Friday,” James said. “She moved into her mother’s old place.”

Blythe had never been there, but had a snapshot that had been taken there -- Greg on the porch, smiling in the sun, the ocean filling the horizon behind him. James had taken the photo, and Blythe often wondered what he’d said that made Greg laugh, let him look so happy in that moment.

“How’s Greg?” Blythe asked.

She heard the chair squeak again as James moved. “I won’t lie and tell you everything’s fine,” he said, “but he’s doing better than I’d expected.”

“But worse that you’d hoped?”

Blythe took his silence as his answer.

“John and I were going to come out to visit in a couple of weeks,” she said. “We could come earlier.”

“No,” James said. “I don’t think you need to do that ...”

“I know we don’t need to.”

“I think,” he said, then seemed to collect his thoughts. “I think he needs some time.” Blythe heard him shift again. “I know you want to be here, but I’m not sure he’s ready to deal with any ... company just now.”

Blythe felt sorrow replace the worry she’d been feeling earlier. She wondered if it was possible for her own heart to break in sympathy with the way Greg must be feeling.

“I’ll talk to him, get him to call you,” James was saying. “If you still want to come after you talk, let me know. I’ll make sure he’s ... presentable.”

Blythe looked down at the lace tablecloth again, traced the shapes against the dark wood of the table. “No, that’s all right,” she said. “I trust you, James.”

“All right. I’ll track him down, try to get him to call you soon,” James said. She could hear him moving again. “If you don’t hear from him by tonight, let me know. I’ll get him to call if I have to dial the phone myself.”

Blythe smiled a little at that. “And how are you going to get him to talk?”

“Give me time, I’ll think of something,” he said, and Blythe giggled for just a moment to think of the number of times she had tried to think of some way to get Greg to be quiet.

“All right,” she said. “Tell him I’ll have my phone with me, so he can call anytime. And James?”

“Yes?”

“Thank you,” she said. “Again.”


--------------


John House answered the door to his son’s home, and held out his hand to shake Wilson’s as he stepped inside.

“Good to see you,” he said.

Wilson nodded. “You’re early,” he said.

“Tailwind,” the Colonel said.

Wilson looked across the room and into the kitchen. He could see House leaning against the butcher block table, shaking his head. Blythe crossed the kitchen between them, pen and paper in her hand.

“Wilson, tell her I’m not starving to death,” House called across the rooms.

“If you’re smart, you’ll stay out of this one,” the Colonel muttered to him, and sat on the couch.

“You’ve lost weight,” Blythe was saying to House, “and you don’t have any food in the house at all.”

Wilson walked up to the kitchen, but stopped at the entrance and leaned against the door frame. Blythe had a cupboard door open, and he could see a few cans of something inside -- vegetables, if he remembered the way Stacy had the kitchen stocked.

“I don’t have food because I’ve been eating it,” House was saying.

Wilson didn’t comment. Blythe was right, House had lost more weight since Stacy left. Not much, but on top of what he’d lost after the infarction, it added up. He’d noticed the change in the past few weeks, and he could only imagine how surprised Blythe must have been to see him. He wondered if he should have warned her.

Blythe turned from the cupboard to look at House. She narrowed her eyes, and House sighed and looked away.

Wilson smiled. He was glad he hadn’t said anything to Blythe. This looked like it could be interesting. Besides, maybe Blythe could make an impact when he couldn’t

“It’s not nice to lie to your mother, Greg,” she said, and House slumped back against the counter. “Have you been eating anything besides sandwiches?”

“I like sandwiches,” House said. He bounced the tip of his cane against the floor.

“You’re a doctor, you know better,” she said. Blythe walked across to the butcher block and wrote a few things on the paper. Wilson wasn’t close enough to see the details, but could make out two rows of neat handwriting.

“And you’re not helping,” she said, turning to Wilson. “What, you couldn’t get him to take care of himself?”

Wilson opened his mouth to apologize, but wasn’t sure what he was supposed to say.

“Warned you,” the Colonel mumbled from the couch.

House smiled and nodded. “Some friend you are,” he said.

“Don’t try to blame him,” Blythe said, turning her attention back on her son. “I’m sure James did everything he could, but you were just too stubborn.”

She turned away from both of them and took her note over to the refrigerator. As she peered inside House caught Wilson’s eye.

“You should see her when she really gets angry,” he said, and Wilson grinned.

“I am angry,” Blythe said without looking at either of them.

House shook his head. Wilson noticed he appeared more at ease than he had for weeks. The haunted look that had been in his eyes was gone.

“You’re out of milk.”

“Just finished it off this morning,” House said.

Blythe turned and looked at him.

“Yesterday morning,” House said, and winced. “Maybe a day or two before that? I didn’t really notice.”

Blythe closed the refrigerator and went back to the table. She wrote a few more things down on the right side of the list.

“You don’t need to do my grocery shopping for me,” House said.

“I do if I’m going to make you some things to eat other than dry cereal and peanut butter,” she said.

“Mom,” House protested, but Blythe stepped up to him.

“It’s called comfort food for a reason, Greg,” she said, softly. “Let me do this for you, please?”

House shrugged, and Blythe smiled.

“Good,” she said. “And I’m not shopping, your father is.”

Blythe picked up her list and handed it to Wilson. “Can you give him a hand?”

Wilson took the list. He glanced up at House, who just gave another shrug. He looked at Blythe. “Please,” she whispered, the tone only slightly different from what she’d used on House. Wilson was pretty sure she wanted the time alone with her son more than the groceries.

“Sure.” Maybe Blythe could get House at least to admit that he missed Stacy. He had refused to say anything beyond a few angry shouts so far.

Wilson took one look at Blythe’s list and decided to head over to the supermarket on Fifth. Things could be pricier there, but they’d have everything she asked for. He studied the items again as the Colonel got a cart: Greek cheese, Asian spices, Italian olives. He wondered how much Blythe had adapted her cooking style over the years to match both her son’s tastes and their family’s travels.

“Good, she’s making peach pie.” the Colonel looked at the list over Wilson’s shoulder. “It was her mother’s recipe, but Blythe’s is better.”

They started down the aisles, Wilson checking off each item as they put it in the basket, the Colonel directing him on which brands Blythe preferred.

“Sometimes I go shopping with her,” he said, and smiled a little. Wilson was reminded of the quiet grin that House would sometimes have when he was lost in thought. “It gives us a chance to spend time together, and I don’t have to make any decisions.”

Wilson handed over the list and let the Colonel take over.

He pushed the cart and the Colonel talked a little about the trip as they made their way along the aisles. He kept up a steady flow of easy conversation, about spring training -- he followed Cleveland, he said -- about the weather back in California, about how Blythe liked to find some plot of dirt to plant a few flowers, no matter where they were housed.

He watched as Wilson put a bag of potato chips in the cart. They weren’t on the list, but Wilson knew House liked them.

“I never liked Stacy,” the Colonel suddenly said, and Wilson turned to look at him. He wondered if there was a reason why he’d decided to make that particular announcement in the frozen foods aisle.

“She was always passing judgment on people,” he continued. Wilson thought to himself that the Colonel did the same thing, but didn’t say anything. “She never thought I was good enough for Greg, which I didn’t mind so much, but I got the idea that she never thought Blythe was good enough for him either, and I couldn’t stand that.”

The Colonel rounded the end of the aisle, past the ice cream and the frozen pizza and Wilson followed him. The Colonel stopped in front of the beer cooler, and reached in for a six-pack of Coors. Wilson found himself thinking that House didn’t like the brand, but then he reached in again and pulled out a six-pack of Heineken.

“Stacy was selfish, and stuck up,” the Colonel said.

He put both six packs of beer on the bottom of the cart, then turned toward Wilson.

“But she saved Greg’s life, when he was too stubborn to save himself,” he said. “And I’ll always be grateful to her for that. Maybe you could thank her for me, if you ever hear from her.”

Wilson nodded. “I will,” he promised.

The cart was overflowing by the time they made it past the dairy case and into line for the cashier. Wilson hoped that Blythe was having some success back at the apartment, and that he wouldn’t end up throwing half of the groceries out a month from now, when House fell back into bad habits.

The Colonel pulled out his wallet before Wilson could move to pay for anything. “I’ve got it,” he said, and peeled off a couple of fifty dollar bills and a few twenties to cover the bill.

The bags filled the trunk, and Wilson had to shift some emergency supplies to fit everything into the space. He finally slammed down the lid.

“That everything?” The Colonel checked Blythe’s list and nodded.

Wilson unlocked the doors and they both climbed in.

“You’re a good friend, Wilson,” the Colonel said, before Wilson turned the ignition key.

Wilson sat back. “So is Greg,” he said.

“Good,” the Colonel said. “I’m glad to hear that.”

He was quiet again, so Wilson started the car and backed out his parking space. He guessed it was the closest to a compliment that the man would ever give, though he wasn’t sure what he was supposed to make of it.

“I’m not going to pretend that I understand my son,” the Colonel said, as they pulled onto the main street. “Maybe I never have. Guess I never will.”

“He’s not easy to get to know,” Wilson said.

“His mother’s always understood him. Maybe I missed too much when he was growing up.” The Colonel turned to Wilson. “But knowing that he’s got a friend like you, makes me think that maybe I didn’t screw everything up with him.”

Wilson weighed the few things House had told him about his father, and compared them to what he’d seen of the man himself. He still wasn’t sure what to think of John House. He shrugged and turned onto House’s street.

“Maybe,” he said, “maybe things aren’t as screwed up as you think.”




(no subject)

Date: 2007-01-21 09:17 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] theanniemal.livejournal.com
I know it's very cliché to say but you make me feel better, about everything, the way only really good writing can. Thanks.
Really like your John. Feels very canon judging by the little we've seen. (Do you read spoilers btw?) I hope we get to read the scene between Blyth and House as well.

(no subject)

Date: 2007-01-21 09:28 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] roga.livejournal.com
“If you’re smart, you’ll stay out of this one,” the Colonel muttered to him, and sat on the couch.

I love your John-Wilson relationship. That's what I thought when I read that line, and of course the grocery shopping scene was even better. John's last words to Wilson were deeply touching. Once again, a lovely piece.

(no subject)

Date: 2007-01-21 09:47 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] hry2007.livejournal.com
I'm of the "John House is a raging asshole" school of thought, but this is a touching story. I can see Blythe handling everything like that.

(no subject)

Date: 2007-01-21 10:30 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] angelfirenze.livejournal.com
Um. I'll refrain from celebrating Stacy's departure in light of House's torture, but...you know I'm happy she's gone. I wish she hadn't come back. I really loved Blythe's conversation with House and how even Wilson couldn't get him to talk, but she could. And I appreciate that John cares that Stacy was evil about Blythe. I could just see that. But, really, he has no right to talk about how someone else is a jerk. Seriously.

And I love Wilson wondering why John would say such a thing in the middle of the frozen food aisle, of all places. *giggles* Update soon! I think that since you're including the links to the new pieces in the ends of the earlier ones, I'll trim it back to the first part. *nods* You're very conscientious that way, I'd say.

One wish: More Cuddles soon? *makes sad puppy face*

(no subject)

Date: 2007-01-21 10:31 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] bbarnett.livejournal.com
Nicely written Namaste. I'm not a big fan of John House and I'm pretty sure that House has good reason to hate his father, but I did find this to be moving. I liked your characterization of Blythe alot. And of course your House and wilson are spot on. Looking forward to more ;)

(no subject)

Date: 2007-01-21 10:42 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] namasteyoga.livejournal.com
That's quite the compliment. Thanks very much. I am moderately spoiled -- I shy away once things get specific -- so I know something may be coming up, but don't know what, exactly. I've tried to keep things fairly open as to John (notice that Wilson still hasn't made up his mind about him) but we'll see what comes up on the show.

As to the House/Blythe conversation ... my intent was to stick to scenes between Wilson and the parents and focus on their relationship. But I'll think about it.

(no subject)

Date: 2007-01-21 10:45 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] namasteyoga.livejournal.com
Thanks. I've tried to keep things open as to John's personality as much as possible, just playing with the idea that Wilson is still trying to figure out what to make of him. Maybe that's cheating, but there's no reason why he couldn't be as difficult to figure out as his son.

(no subject)

Date: 2007-01-21 10:46 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] namasteyoga.livejournal.com
Canon may yet change my mind about John House, but for now, I keep thinking that Blythe seems like a good person -- and House certainly seems to love her -- so if John really is an asshole, then what does that say about her that she'd stay with him?

(no subject)

Date: 2007-01-21 10:52 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] namasteyoga.livejournal.com
The frozen food line popped into my head and kind of shaped the entire grocery shopping scene. And like I mentioned to someone above, I'm trying to take advantage of Wilson's own curiosity about John's intentions to keep things a bit open -- that he certainly hasn't been won over by John, but at the same time finds hard to reconcile what he may have heard about him with what he now sees.

I don't know how well Cuddy will fit into this piece, but I'll keep my eye out for a place to sneak her in.

(no subject)

Date: 2007-01-21 10:54 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] namasteyoga.livejournal.com
Thanks. I do like Blythe better than John, obviously -- notice I haven't tried to get inside his head for a POV. That'd be a scary place, I think.

(no subject)

Date: 2007-01-21 11:06 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] panda-chibi.livejournal.com
I really like this series. I like your John. He's more complicated than just "evil asshole"... People are complicated... Life is complicated.

I don't read spoilers, but previews can give away a lot, so I'm almost certain we're not gonna like John after the next episode... he may even be unforgivable to some... But as I said, people are complicated. And I enjoy seeing this side of him - the one he shows to Wilson and to Blythe. I have a feeling it's a side he rarely shows to House...

Anyway, good story. Everyone seems IC to me, and I like that. *mems*

(no subject)

Date: 2007-01-21 11:17 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] blackmare-9.livejournal.com
I find this so, so believable and I'm loving the unusual focus on Wilson and the senior Houses.

As for John House, well, I've never seen any of the episodes he was in, but I used to date a guy whose father was very abusive and he had a lot of House-type issues--as well as a very Wilsonian best friend who stuck with him when no one else would. Quite interesting.

My pet theory is that John did a lot of harm to his son while Blythe wasn't there to observe. And House never told his mom. When he was little he'd have been too scared to tell, and as he got older he'd have kept quiet because he knew that information would destroy his parents' marriage and break Blythe's heart. So she doesn't know, and he's never going to tell her, because what would be the point now? At least, that's my story--and I'm stickin' to it, until canon tells me otherwise.

(no subject)

Date: 2007-01-21 11:48 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] hry2007.livejournal.com
That she's like a lot of domestic abuse victims. One of the few things in this world that messes with someone more than being abused is watching someone you care about get abused, which, if I'm right (I avoid spoilers), explains a fair bit about House.

(no subject)

Date: 2007-01-21 11:59 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] namasteyoga.livejournal.com
If John was an abusive asshole, that'd be true, but my other issue is that I hate the idea that just one or two things could explain a lot about House. I like him to have multiple causes for his screwed up-edness -- or having absolutely no reason. But like I said, we'll have to see what canon gives us.

(no subject)

Date: 2007-01-22 12:03 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] namasteyoga.livejournal.com
Thanks. I do like things -- and people -- complicated. Guess that's why I like House himself so much.

(no subject)

Date: 2007-01-22 12:08 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] namasteyoga.livejournal.com
Thanks. It's kind of hard sometimes to keep the focus on Wilson and the parents, but then I could always explore some of those other areas in other fics.

And House, the show, being House, the show, I have the feeling that we're still not going to know everything, even when they do give us any information.

(no subject)

Date: 2007-01-22 12:31 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] hry2007.livejournal.com
Oh it's definitely not just the abuse. House has an interesting history, and I'm betting the moving around a lot explains some of his attatchment issues too, as well as working in medicine.

(no subject)

Date: 2007-01-22 12:33 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] asynca.livejournal.com
Interesting idea, having House's father disapprove of Stacy. I'd never thought about it before, but it's absolutely possible she may have come across as stuck-up and judgmental to them. Although I tend to think she maintains a certain aloofness that could be misinterpreted as those sentiments.

Will House's parents find out how screwed-up Wilson is, as well? I think it would be an interesting conflict, loving Wilson for taking care of their Greg, but angry at him for something he might do later in the piece. An interesting shade of grey to explore, maybe.

(no subject)

Date: 2007-01-22 12:38 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] stephantom.livejournal.com
Still really enjoying this. Love how Blythe knew what happened - not that it was that it was that hard to guess, but it does go along with House's claim that she's a human lie detector, and suggests that some of House's intuitive problem-solving might be from her. Her protectiveness in the kitchen was very sweet. And of course, the interaction between John and Wilson was great and very interesting. I also really liked the line about the frozen foods aisle. Heh. I'm interested to see where you'll take this after the next episode - I know only very vague spoilers, which it seems you are also aware of, and I'm very curious about what we'll find out. Anyway, looking forward to more!

(no subject)

Date: 2007-01-22 12:40 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] namasteyoga.livejournal.com
Heh. Now, now, don't be in such a rush. We've got plenty of time to cover before we get to that point, but yes, let's say that there is a two-way street in my version of their relationship.

(no subject)

Date: 2007-01-22 12:46 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] namasteyoga.livejournal.com
Originally I was going to have Wilson tell her, but then decided to take advantage of the "human lie detector" line. And hopefully, I've played with the time frame enough, and been vague enough, that I can adjust as necessary. (For instance, even if John turns out to be a complete ass, wouldn't that be interesting to Wilson, just as he started to almost like the guy to find that out?) But, like I said, I just have a vague concept of the spoilers.

(no subject)

Date: 2007-01-22 02:12 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] delphinapterus.livejournal.com
This is one of the very places where I can stand John House and he comes across as a belivable semi-jerk, very very well done. I really liked his observations about Stacy. The judgemental comment is especially apt, although I also thought she was needlessly cruel when the show first introduced her so I might be a wee bit baised where her character is concerned.

I'm really glad you're continuing this. Blythe watching from outside and seeing their friendship and Wilson watching the Houses is really well done and puts things a different light.

(no subject)

Date: 2007-01-22 02:37 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] namasteyoga.livejournal.com
Thanks. I do think that John, perhaps, saw a little of himself reflected back in Stacy in terms of being judgmental, as Wilson thought -- and he may have disliked her from the start, and found things in her to back up his first assessment. (I can really picture him as a "no second chances" kind of guy.)

But then as I've said previously, I like complicated people.

(no subject)

Date: 2007-01-22 03:51 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] violaswamp.livejournal.com
I'm really enjoying this series. It's a great extrapolation from the Blythe and John we see in canon--very plausible. I also love your House and Wilson, and your take on this whole period of time. I kind of hope that the show never shows us flashbacks about House's recovery, because it's interesting to imagine.

(no subject)

Date: 2007-01-22 04:05 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] delphinapterus.livejournal.com
Complicated people are always the most interesting. There is a quote from an old Russian? writer to the affect that happy families are always the same but unhappy families are always unique in their unhappy.

(no subject)

Date: 2007-01-22 07:44 am (UTC)
ext_25649: House sucking a lollipop while staring at Wilson (Default)
From: [identity profile] daisylily.livejournal.com
I really love this series - it's so interesting to see another take on John House. I like his opinion of Stacy; it makes perfect sense.

::patiently waits for next instalment::

(no subject)

Date: 2007-01-22 11:53 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] namasteyoga.livejournal.com
Thanks. It's kind of a good thing that we haven't seen this era for myself, personally, because I think about half my fics touch on it in some way. I'd be blocked if I didn't have the excuse of backstory.

(no subject)

Date: 2007-01-22 11:54 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] namasteyoga.livejournal.com
Thank you. We'll see how long the next chapter takes to write. This one actually came very quickly -- not that I'm complaining.

(no subject)

Date: 2007-01-22 04:01 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] castaliae.livejournal.com
I've really been enjoying this series. As always your writing gives a sense of place in the real world. Thanks.

(no subject)

Date: 2007-01-22 04:16 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] dianaprallon.livejournal.com
I liked it all, although I really like Stacy (and can totally understand why she left). Its an interessting point of view. o/

(no subject)

Date: 2007-01-22 07:50 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] namasteyoga.livejournal.com
You're welcome. I'm glad you like it.

(no subject)

Date: 2007-01-22 07:51 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] namasteyoga.livejournal.com
My last multi-chapter story was all about House and Stacy's original breakup, with lots of Stacy POV -- in which she wasn't a bitch. It was kind of interesting to approach it from the POV of someone who wasn't close to the emotional turmoil that must have been.

(no subject)

Date: 2007-01-23 12:37 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] dianaprallon.livejournal.com
sounds interresting, where is it?

(no subject)

Date: 2007-01-23 12:45 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] namasteyoga.livejournal.com
It's all in my LJ, though the start of it is back a few pages.

The first part is here:
http://namasteyoga.livejournal.com/3200.html#cutid1

(no subject)

Date: 2007-01-23 02:44 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] dianaprallon.livejournal.com
I'll read it as soon as I'm done with my college stuff.
Hate this "end-of-term" period.

(no subject)

Date: 2007-01-29 08:17 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] joe-pike-junior.livejournal.com
I'm a sucker for House and his parents, and coming from you this is no exception. What a brilliant way to go about it, too.

“She was always passing judgment on people,” he continued. Wilson thought to himself that the Colonel did the same thing, but didn’t say anything. “She never thought I was good enough for Greg, which I didn’t mind so much, but I got the idea that she never thought Blythe was good enough for him either, and I couldn’t stand that.”
This is one of the things you do best, I think: provide really solid character detail. This is so in character for what we've seen of John, a perfect extension of the small knowledge we have of him, compounded with an understanding of the other characters on the show.

I love Blythe in this scene.
“It’s not nice to lie to your mother, Greg,” she said, and House slumped back against the counter. “Have you eating anything besides sandwiches?”
This should be 'have you been', I think. Sorry if I'm not the first to point that out.

Well done, jolly good show, etc. (Deserves a longer comment, I think, as well, but I'm cooking dinner. But I do tend to go on, so that may be a good thing).

Cheers,
Armchair Elvis.


(no subject)

Date: 2007-01-29 03:53 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] namasteyoga.livejournal.com
I fixed it. Thanks. And I'm glad you're enjoying it. For that kitchen scene, I kept trying to picture Blythe as the mama bear who finally has something she can do for her cub.

(no subject)

Date: 2007-07-20 06:22 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mystcphoenxcafe.livejournal.com
Greetings!

Yes, when in doubt - feed the men!!! Good principle, and one that seems to work a surprising amount of the time. :p

Another wonderful segment!!!
Onward,
-Katrina

Profile

namaste: (Default)
namaste

October 2011

S M T W T F S
      1
2345678
9101112131415
16171819202122
23242526272829
3031     

Page Summary

Style Credit

Expand Cut Tags

No cut tags